2021年考研英语一作文解析（济南考研网）

　　Part A

　　Directions：

　　A foreign friend of yours has recently graduated from college and intends to find a job in China. Please write an email to him/her to make some suggestions.

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2

　　Do not sign your own mane at the end. Use “Li Ming” instead.

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Tom,

　　I am Li Ming, writing this letter to provide some suggestions for you about how to find a suitable job in China.

　　Suggestions can be summarized as follows. First of all, I suggest that you should make an excellent resume in advance, which will definitely improve your working efficiency. In addition, it is beneficial for you to look for a job in Beijing or Shanghai, because it will enable you to grow fast and adapt to Chinese life as soon as possible. Last but not least, you’d better acquire some information about the company if you receive a job interview.

　　If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Wish you find a desirable job in the near future.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　【解析】

　　本次小作文要求考生给外国朋友写一封邮件。外国好友即将毕业，想在中国找工作，考生需对此提出建议。信件类型属于课上重点讲解的建议信，且建议内容比较切合考生实际, 另外题干基本不包含生词，所以总体来讲难度不大。对于本篇作文，写完称呼之后，第一段可以简单地做一下自我介绍，并点明写信目的。第二段提出具体建议，可采取总分形式。总建议句之后列出分建议。考生可根据自己实际，提出两到三条分建议。分建议应尽量避免“假大空”，可提出比较切实可行的建议，比如制作简历，发送简历，准备正装进行面试以及制定自己的职业规划等。建议句式可采用，“I suggest that sb. should do sth.”“I deem that sb. be supposed to do sth.” “It is beneficial for sb. to do sth. ” 等。第三段进行总结，表达祝福等。最后记得加上结束语和签名即可。

　　Part B

　　Directions:

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the pictures below. In your essay, you should,

　　1)describe the pictures briefly,

　　2)interpret the implied meaning, and

　　3)give your comments.

　　Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

　　【参考范文】

　　As is conveyed in the picture, with apuzzled expression, on the left side of the cartoon is a son who wears traditional Chinese operacostume, asking his father, "Myclassmatesdonotunderstandthecharmoflearning Chineseopera." Whilehisfatheriswiththewords,"Aslongasyouaresatisfied." Simple as the picture is, the meaning is thought-provoking.